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Response to: Robinson et al. (2015) Captive Reptile Mortality Rates in the Home and Implications for the Wildlife Trade. PLoS ONE 10(11): e0141460. doi:10.1371/journal.pone.0141460

Posted by ecoarena on 06 Dec 2015 at 16:09 GMT

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Robinson JE, St. John FAV, Griffiths RA, Roberts DL (2015) Captive Reptile Mortality Rates in the Home and Implications for the Wildlife Trade. PLoS ONE 10(11): e0141460. doi:10.1371/journal.pone.0141460

This survey-based study claims that the overall mortality rate for reptiles in UK homes is 3.6% in the first year following acquisition. The authors’ findings are at odds with a more extensive study that found that the mortality rate for reptiles in the home was 75% in their first year (Toland et al., 2012). There are numerous major problems with Robinson et al.’s study that explain their anomalous results and for which we provide examples as follows:

Statistical relevance: The survey involved asking questions of just 265 individual respondents at two reptile and amphibian markets in the United Kingdom by which the authors seek to reach a conclusion that applies to the 1.1 million reptiles in UK homes (PFMA, 2015). In our view, the 265 interviewees represent a disproportionate and unrepresentative sample on which to base an accurate estimate of mortality rate.

Respondent recall: The survey asked the respondents the following key question: “Of the X (reptiles) that you acquired over the last five years, how many died within the first 12 months?” The question not only implies that the respondents kept accurate temporal logs for mortalities within each 12-month period over five successive years, which is highly improbable and certainly not reported, but that the respondents were able to accurately recall this information from memory.

Response orchestration: the respondents were part of two events organised and promoted by reptile-keeping societies, both of which have public pro-trade and animal keeping agendas. Relatedly, vested interest parties utilised associated publicly accessible media in advance of the survey to express the value of ‘low mortality’ messages – effectively for propagandist reasons. Therefore, many of the respondents were likely aware of this Internet campaign (whether or not they were members of the special interest societies) and thus could have cultured (selectively appropriate) answers. No statistical formula is capable of correcting such data bias.

Respondent biases: the respondents reported that collectively they kept 6,689 reptiles over the preceding five years, which means that each respondent typically kept multiple animals. The authors report a ‘range’ of 1 – 1,003 animals per keeper, but manifestly the vast majority of respondents were keeping numerous animals. Therefore, the respondents were primarily multiple animal keeping hobbyists and breeders and not typical reptile-keeping members of the public. This means that the respondents were relatively specialised keepers compared with the average person and thus the base data are not representative of overall mortality rates in the home. Although the authors partially recognise this ‘subset’ issue, they do not factor it into their findings.

Respondent honesty: the authors repeatedly claim, based on the respondents’ indications, that they did not regard the questions about mortality in their animals to be ‘sensitive’ – ergo that they would provide honest answers. Relatedly, the authors also claim that their honesty test system (e.g. using playing cards to disguise the number of animals that may have died, to improve anonymity and to promote honest answers) verified the honesty of the respondents. However, the survey is wholly dependent on contributor declarations and honesty, and the ‘playing card test’ cannot ensure accurate reporting. This is because the cards can only assist anonymity and ‘face-saving’ by ‘disguising’ mortalities to a maximum of ten, and respondents who may have lost tens or hundreds of animals may be dissuaded from admitting mortality rates that exceed the card numerical ‘buffer’ (see previous comment regarding actual numbers of animals in captivity per keeper). The authors themselves admit that with increasing numbers of mortality (once 10 is exceeded) the level of protection afforded the respondent decreases; reporting a value of 20, indicates that 10 reptiles (at least) had died (see S2 Appendix). Oddly, the authors acknowledge possible (untested) reporting bias for ‘sensitivity’ regarding whether animals were genuinely captive-bred versus wild-caught, but then expect the same respondents not to be sensitive about animals dying in their care. In addition, in the section ‘Evaluation of additive RRT’, 56% of respondents stated that they felt that their answers were protected, compared to 13% who did not feel that their answers were protected, which leaves a highly significant 31%.

The premature death of pet animals fundamentally questions the credibility of the owner, which increases risk of dishonesty, particularly if respondents felt they were in the presence of more experienced reptile keepers, or relatives (from whom they may have hidden past losses). Interviews were carried out in ‘breakout areas’ (e.g. cafeteria) and thus were not entirely private and potentially subject to the scrutiny of other keepers who may have been within audible distance. This aspect of ‘fear of losing face’ was not properly explored and would likely have had an impact on respondents’ answers. Regardless, if the respondents provided false information, then the data are skewed no matter what verification tests are applied to their given answers.

The study surveys were conducted at two events known to be associated with significant criminal activity, described in a recent High Court ruling to involve ‘impermissible sales of animals’ (McGowan, 2013). Both formal traders and so-called ‘hobbyist-sellers’ of reptiles have for several years been made aware of serious legal repercussions for those found to be selling reptiles at the two surveyed events (‘International Herpetological Society Breeder’s Meeting’, Doncaster and ‘Federation of British Herpetologists’ Kempton Park Reptile Breeders’ Meeting’). These legal dangers have recently been highlighted through successful prosecutions of trade-hobbyist-sellers, and one of these prosecutions was in progress throughout the study, presenting a substantive deterrent against respondent honesty. The adverse publicity surrounding these two events has likely stimulated a collective interest amongst stallholders and visitors in presenting their hobby or trade in a more favourable light. Traders prosecuted at these events, including the Doncaster market, claimed to be hobbyists selling their own surplus pets but have been deemed by the courts to be commercial traders. These well-publicised cases have further encouraged other breeders and sellers to adopt a default self-definition of ‘hobbyist breeder’.

Furthermore, the survey questionnaire was incidentally designed in such a way that data regarding the nature of the respondents are inevitably skewed. The second question of the questionnaire asks the reptile keeper to categorise him or herself as either a private keeper (who keeps reptiles for pleasure), a private breeder (who keeps and breeds reptiles for pleasure), a private breeder (who keeps reptiles mainly for monetary gain) or a commercial enterprise. The distinction drawn between the latter two categories, however, is unclear and even if respondents had answered honestly, artificial separation between these two categories probably led the authors to class those breeders keeping reptiles for monetary gain as non-commercial. Also, the positioning of this question so early in the questionnaire may have added to its apprehension quality and affect response accuracy. It is reasonable to propose that a proportion of respondents, who constituted at least part of the data, were commercially motivated breeders and sellers, but wished to avoid declaring their activities. The events’ associations with illegal activities probably decreases further the likelihood of honest reporting by surveyed individuals.

A further problem relates to respondent honesty in terms of a perceived risk of prosecution. Should respondents admit to significant mortality rates then they may be liable to consideration for prosecution in respect of committing offences under the Animal Welfare Act (2006). Whether or not such respondents may be formally identified during the survey, they may nevertheless feel exposed to risk of identification and conceal both their mortality rates and their concern about them. Accordingly, it is likely that some or all respondents would wish to misrepresent their losses to avoid risk of prosecution.

Given the controversy and history around these itinerant selling events, it is improbable that the event organisers would have permitted a study where the potential outcomes would be likely to undermine the already low credibility, security and longevity of such events. The study authors, therefore, may have made a fundamental error in involving the politically motivated event organisers in the promotion of the survey. The capacity for propaganda-cultured responses referred to above was likely a major factor in the ‘acceptability’ of the study at the two events in anticipation of favourable results.

Other issues: The results also cited an indication that captive-bred reptiles have lower mean mortality rates than those of wild-caught or captive-farmed origin. However, the authors reported that the “differences were not considered significant given overlapping confidence intervals” (italics added). If the data shows no statistical significance, then no difference exists. The discussion also claims that “captive bred individuals appeared to have lower mortality rates”, but then proceeds to contradict itself by saying “this was just a non-significant trend”. Other scientifically weak claims are present in the conclusions, for example phrases such as ‘Cases of high mortality in the trade are reported [references cited], but these cases do not appear to be frequent”. The expression “do not appear” has no place in empirical scientific research.

Conclusion

In our view, the survey offers highly misleading conclusions and exemplifies the dangers of using selective small-scale subset material to assess a more complex superset issue. The cohort interviewed was unrepresentative, and it is doubtful that even the ‘right’ cohort, based on actual mortality logs and not distant recall, would be both willing and truthful as to losses where to do so may expose respondents to embarrassment and/or prosecution. The very nature of this study’s approach suggests that respondents were likely to provide false answers. The study’s anomalous results are therefore highly questionable and unreliable, and serve to draw attention away from the true impact of captivity on reptile mortality rates.


Phillip C Arena BSc(Hons) PhD
Robert Laidlaw CBiol MRSB
Angelo J L Lambiris NHED MSc PhD CBiol FRSB
Thomas E S Langton BSc(Hons) CBiol FRSB
Anthony Pilny DVM DABVP
Catrina Steedman BSc(Hons) MRSB
Elaine Toland BSc(Hons) MRSB FRSPH
Clifford Warwick PGDipMedSci CBiol CSci EurProBiol FOCAE FRSB

References

McGowan, J. (2015) Kent v Arun District Council. Neutral Citation Number: [2015] EWHC 2295 (Admin)

PFMA (2015) Pet Food Manufacturers Association. Pet Population 2015
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Toland, E., Warwick, C., & Arena, P.C. (2012) The exotic pet trade: pet hate. The Biologist 59(3);14-18.

No competing interests declared.

RE: Response to: Robinson et al. (2015) Captive Reptile Mortality Rates in the Home and Implications for the Wildlife Trade. PLoS ONE 10(11): e0141460. doi:10.1371/journal.pone.0141460

jr418 replied to ecoarena on 21 Jan 2016 at 11:13 GMT

In this paper we investigated mortality rates of reptiles in the home using a specialised technique for asking sensitive questions, as well as direct questioning. Our work has been published following a rigorous peer-review process and our extensive data set placed in the public domain. Many of the comments raised by Arena et al. regarding our study are already addressed within the paper or the wider literature on quantitative social science methodology including research on Randomised Response Techniques (RRT) to which we refer. For this reason, we have not prepared a point by point response, but rather we clarify and reiterate some of the points raised and direct the reader to the paper itself and associated literature.

Arena et al. inaccurately state in their main point regarding ‘statistical relevance’ that we make conclusions about ‘the 1.1 million reptiles in UK homes’. However , the respondent sample is clearly outlined within the Methods, Results, Discussion and Conclusion sections of the manuscript (e.g. pg. 3, Methods: ‘A questionnaire was administered through face-to-face interviews by a team of six to ten trained research assistants at two major herpetological events in the UK…’ and pg 11, Conclusion: ‘Our research suggests that the number of reptiles that die in the home within one year of acquisition by private keepers and breeders of reptiles who attend reptile shows is relatively low (3.6%)...’). Therefore we do not extrapolate this figure to the wider population as Arena et al. indicate but present our findings with respect to the populations from which our respondent sample was drawn. As the intention of our study was to gather data on a wide range of reptile species in the trade, carrying out the survey at events attended by keepers of a wide range of species was entirely appropriate, and avoided potential biases associated with a focus on a narrower range of species that may be widely traded but unrepresentative of all species in the trade.

Although Arena et al. quote a range of 1-1003 snakes kept by respondents when referring to ‘respondent biases’ and ‘respondent recall’, we actually reported that a median of nine snakes, two chelonians (range: 1-30) and/or five lizards (range: 1-60) were kept by respondents over five years. This illustrates that most people did not keep very high numbers of animals that may have made it difficult for them to recall how many had died within the 1st year of acquisition without detailed records. Regarding respondents’ assessment of the aRRT methodology, we report in the manuscript that ‘Over 56% of respondents felt that their answers were protected by aRRT compared to 13% who did not….’ We clarify here that the ‘highly significant 31%’ mentioned in Arena et al.’s comment regarding ‘respondent honesty’ refers to those who stated that they felt their answers were 'neither protected nor unprotected' (therefore, indifferent).

Many of the concerns raised by Arena et al. relate to the honesty of respondents and the legality of the subject under investigation. These matters are covered in detail within the manuscript and were our stimulus for adopting a specialised method designed specifically for asking potentially sensitive questions (e.g. Gupta et al. 2010, Lensvelt-Mulders et al. 2005, Nuno & St. John 2015). The additive randomised response technique (see Methods section of the manuscript) was chosen specifically to reduce social desirability bias and non-response bias that may arise as a result of people feeling that they may ‘lose face’, ‘be afraid of prosecution’ or ‘affected by peer pressure’. Consequently, the methods we used were entirely appropriate for the topic under investigation and our study population. Indeed other published studies have adopted similar methodological approaches when faced with comparable issues of sensitivity and illegality (e.g. Razafimanahaka et al. 2012, St. John et al. 2010, 2012, Solomon et al. 2007). We are therefore confident that we took sufficient steps to encourage truthful reporting.

Arena et al. question the design and analysis of the survey and the involvement of traders and ‘hobbyist-sellers’. In fact, we have followed good practice in these respects, particularly with regards to stakeholder engagement, transparency and ethical assessment (e.g. see guidance provided by Newing [2011] on these issues). The questionnaire was appropriately designed and piloted and trends that are not statistically significant are interpreted cautiously.

Finally, we emphasise that this is the first peer-reviewed study on captive reptile mortality rates which is based on the collection of primary data from a consumer group and which also covers a range of reptile taxa. We chose to publish the results in Plos One so that the detailed methodology, results and data are all in the public domain. Arena et al.’s critique centres on the assumption that Toland et al.’s (2012) estimate of at least 75% mortality in the first year of acquisition represents a more reliable estimate of reptile mortality in the home. Although Arena et al. claim this is a ‘more extensive study’, and that our results are ‘anomalous’, Toland et al. (2012) provide extremely limited detail of methodology, sample size, or statistical analysis. It is therefore unclear how the 75% mortality rate was derived or what assumptions were made in the analysis. Moreover, the taxa on which the figure of 75% mortality is based are not stated, nor are the data in the public domain. It is therefore currently impossible to assess the validity of Toland et al.s’ (2012) findings in relation to ours.

The international trade in exotic pets is a significant cause for conservation concern. Resolving some of the pressing issues concerning mortality within the trade requires independent research using contemporary designs and methodologies. We urge all researchers in this area to publish their full methodologies and data sets in open access journals that are peer-reviewed so that they are available for scrutiny by all stakeholders.

Janine E. Robinson
Freya A. V. St. John
Richard A. Griffiths
David L. Roberts

Durrell Institute of Conservation and Ecology, School of Anthropology and Conservation, University of Kent

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Razafimanahaka JH, Jenkins RKB, Andriafidison D, Randrianandrianina F, Rakotomboavonjy V, Keane A, et al. Novel approach for quantifying illegal bushmeat consumption reveals high consumption of protected species in Madagascar. Oryx. 2012;46:584-92.

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St John FAV, Keane AM, Edwards-Jones G, Jones L, Yarnell RW, Jones JPG. Identifying indicators of illegal behaviour: carnivore killing in human-managed landscapes. Proceedings of the Royal Society B-Biological Sciences. 2012;279(1729):804-12.

No competing interests declared.

RE: RE: Response to: Robinson et al. (2015) Captive Reptile Mortality Rates in the Home and Implications for the Wildlife Trade. PLoS ONE 10(11): e0141460. doi:10.1371/journal.pone.0141460

ecoarena replied to jr418 on 19 Feb 2016 at 01:03 GMT

Response to: Robinson et al. (2015) Captive Reptile Mortality Rates in the Home and Implications for the Wildlife Trade. PLoS ONE 10(11): e0141460. doi:10.1371/journal.pone.0141460

Arena et al response (2nd) to Robinson et al.


Robinson et al titled their paper ‘Captive reptile mortality rates in the home (our emphasis) and implications for the wildlife trade’. The authors convey as part of their defence that their conclusions refer to ‘private keepers and breeders of reptiles who attend reptile shows’. ‘Private keepers’ is a term usually ascribed to people who comprise the keepers of the 1.1+ million reptiles in homes generally. Furthermore, the paper, in particular the title, Abstract and Conclusion (three of the primary sections gleaned by readers for an overview of paper content), is very general in its application, again, referring to ‘the home’. A title that does not properly represent the contents is not a good foundation or messenger for a scientific article. Robinson et al redirect readers to their original paper for clarifications, which of course, is completely proper, to attain their own conclusions. However, in our view, this does not, as we will outline, aid in their defence. A good paper will have emphasised its limitations and applicability – spurring further research to address such deficits.

In their main paper, Robinson et al make numerous statements that imply their work has a broader implication beyond mere traders and keepers that attend shows (pet markets). For example, the authors state: “Given the lack of published studies and widely conflicting available reports, it is evident that current primary data on mortality rates of reptiles in the home would be welcomed by all interested stakeholders. Obtaining data on mortality of reptiles in the home relies on gathering information from consumers.” and “We investigated mortality rates of pet reptiles amongst domestic reptile keepers at two major herpetological events in the UK…”. The authors do not qualify these statements to infer they apply to anything other than ordinary homes of reptile keepers, and from the Introduction onwards the generality of their paper’s messaging is that the authors’ study (again) relates to the general ‘home’ environment and thus is relevant to the general population.

In addition, in the Discussion, the authors state: “We estimated the overall mortality rate of pet reptiles… amongst private breeders and keepers of reptiles, to be 3.6% within the first year of acquisition, which is considerably lower than some previous estimates.” However, here the only relevant estimates to which the authors are referring, and which they cite in their main paper, are Lawrence (1987), Clark (unpublished), and Toland et al (2012). We will not include the findings of Clark further here on the basis of that being an undergraduate essay. Therefore, because Lawrence (1987) and Toland et al (2012) relate to mortality in the home in general (rather than in trade and transport or other specific sectors), and because Robinson et al (2015) seek to compare their paper with these publications, it follows that the authors do effectively present their data as addressing mortality issues in the same context as these earlier works, that is, pertaining to the general population of reptiles in the home. At the very least, and regardless of methodology problems, we find the authors descriptions of mortality relevance ambiguous, and in this regard alone their paper has been unhelpful to animal welfare science because it is manifestly very open to convenient use by exploitative vested interests.

Regardless, Robinson et al are now unambiguously stating that their data do not apply to animals in the general private population. However, even if Robinson et al meant to comprehensively convey that their study does not relate to reptiles in general households throughout the country then it remains that the title of their paper implies greater relevance that it covers. Even if we were to accept (which we do not) that the authors aRRT methods were appropriate for the special dynamics and legal conundrums associated with the interview process, the authors ought to have titled their paper something like: ‘Declared unverified mortality rates among reptiles possessed by a limited sector of private keepers, covert and overt animal traders, and hobbyists’.

Although we have already cited the following example in our previous response we again draw attention to Robinson et al’s assertion that: “trends that are not statistically significant are interpreted cautiously”. However, in their Abstract they state that “results suggest that mortality rates may be lowest for captive bred animals”. Whereas in the body of the text the authors acknowledge that the difference in mortality rates between captive-bred, wild-caught or captive-farmed is not significant. Therefore, Robinson et al assign an insignificant message to a prominent position as a finding in their Abstract.

Robinson et al’s elaborate claim: “Over 56% of respondents felt that their answers were protected by aRRT compared to 13% who did not….’ We clarify here that the ‘highly significant 31%’ mentioned in Arena et al.’s comment regarding ‘respondent honesty’ refers to those who stated that they felt their answers were 'neither protected nor unprotected' (therefore, indifferent).” However, in answer to a direct question, 33.3% of those surveyed said that they thought it was unlikely that people would tell the truth about the quantity of their reptiles that had died (see S1 Table in appendix). Given the unlawful nature of much of the animal selling at the surveyed pet markets and the promotion of the survey for propagandist reasons, the actual number of dishonest respondents could be far greater.

An associated problem that we previously highlighted was the aRRT model used, which, in the interests of face-saving and anonymity, gave a numerical buffer of no more than ten to disguise the actual number of reptile mortalities. Clearly this model could not fulfill its purpose where keepers and dealers may have lost many tens or hundreds of animals over the five-year period. The authors report that an undergraduate student essay by Clark (unpublished), which was produced in association with reptile traders and trade representatives, informed the choice of aRRT model used (see S2 appendix). Clark’s (unpublished) essay is also liberally cited throughout Robinson et al’s study.

A key problem with the methodology of Robinson et al’s article was the illicit nature of animal selling at the events at which reptile keepers/sellers were surveyed. This important context was substantively omitted but is essential when considering the honesty of respondents’ answers on which the study relies. We maintain that asking questions dependent on honesty of respondents at two events with inherent dishonesty issues is incapable of providing reliable data, and instead constitutes a fundamental flaw in the methodology. Incidental or orchestrated dishonesty is not resolvable with the stated methodology.

Relatedly, Robinson et al seek to defend their data and the ‘honesty of respondents’ by citing studies that they claim have worked successfully for sensitive questions in relation to conservation and illegality issues. However, research into ‘sensitive conservation’ issues (arguably as contentious as mortality questions) has been unable to provide reliable, or even very approximate, figures. For example, the percentages for illegally traded wildlife have been cited at 25 – 44% (Karesh et al, 2007; Natusch & Lyons, 2012), and the global value of illegal wildlife trade is estimated at between $10-20bn (Webb, 2000; Rosen & Smith, 2010) – ergo both ‘sensitive’ subject estimates offer gross variation. The authors themselves comment that it is difficult to verify whether reptiles are captive-bred or wild-caught animals because there “may be some degree of sensitivity surrounding the topic”. Accordingly, on these key ‘sensitive’ questions, no research has provided reliable data using any method, not least because of the paradigm that, illegal, potentially illegal, or embarrassing activities are by their nature extremely difficult to ascertain.

Robinson et al comment that “as the intention of our study was to gather data on a wide range of reptile species in the trade, carrying out the survey at events attended by keepers of a wide range of species was entirely appropriate, and avoided potential biases associated with a focus on a narrower range of species that may be widely traded but unrepresentative of all species in the trade.” We agree with Robinson et al that studying a narrow set of species would not be appropriately representative. However, contrary to Robinson et al’s claim, the range of reptile (and amphibian) species present at the two events they studied did not represent all species in the trade, in fact not even close. For example, Arena et al (2012) recorded 178 species between three events (one of which was a same event studied by Robinson et al 2015, and two of a similar nature), whereas approximately 500 reptile species alone may occur in trade (Auliya, 2003). Accordingly, if Robinson et al considered a wide range of species to be relevant to reliable data, then this is another element of their data that was not representative.

Robinson et al comment that: “Although Arena et al. quote a range of 1-1003 snakes kept by respondents when referring to ‘respondent biases’ and ‘respondent recall’, we actually reported that a median of nine snakes, two chelonians (range: 1-30) and/or five lizards (range: 1-60) were kept by respondents over five years. This illustrates that most people did not keep very high numbers of animals that may have made it difficult for them to recall how many had died within the 1st year of acquisition without detailed records.” Robinson et al’s study took place at events where attendees (thus potentially all interviewees) are known to grossly understate the numbers of animals they possess and sell, partly due to risk of perception as commercial traders and thus risk of exposing themselves to prosecution or targeting for relevant taxation. Therefore, declarations giving rise to a median number are largely irrelevant. Regardless, the remaining data are sufficient to dramatically skew the median number of animals claimed to be held.

Regarding the Toland et al (2012) study, Robinson et al comment that: “Moreover, the taxa on which the figure of 75% mortality is based are not stated, nor are the data in the public domain. It is therefore currently impossible to assess the validity of Toland et al’s (2012) findings in relation to ours.” Unlike in Robinson et al’s main paper, Toland et al’s (2012) study represented all taxa.

In Toland et al, the approach taken involved total numbers (derived from government and declared trade data including some of the same material used in Robinson et al, 2015) of reptiles entering the trade and keeping pipeline annually compared with total numbers of surviving reptiles (based on entirely independent surveys by statistical data gatherers utilised by government for their data quality and relevance) in homes year on year. Toland et al’s methodology was reduced and summarised by the publisher, not the authors, for spatial reasons after extensive peer-review for data and analytical robustness. For the avoidance of doubt, Toland et al’s (2012) article appeared in a peer-reviewed publication after a long and robust peer-review process. Nevertheless, Toland et al’s (2012) data has been incorporated into an even more extensive, multi-animal class study, to appear in an open access, and less spatially restrictive, journal later in 2016/17.

We agree with Robinson et al that the international trade in exotic pets is a significant cause for conservation concern. In our view, concern extends as much to the welfare of these animals as to any other aspect of the pressures on wild animals (whether wild-caught or captive-bred) for the exotic pet trade. However, as we predicted in our first response, Robinson et al’s study is being utilised by reptile traders and keepers (including those who assisted Robinson et al with their study) as a device to lead (or mislead) others, particularly those responsible for regulating trade and keeping, into believing that reptile mortality ‘in the home’ is low. In part, this misuse of information is unsurprising, given the exploitative nature of wildlife traders and keepers and the misleading title and ambiguous results of Robinson et al’s paper. Accordingly, we do not consider that Robinson et al’s response should alter our primary comments.

Phillip C Arena BSc(Hons) PhD
Robert Laidlaw CBiol MRSB
Angelo J L Lambiris NHED MSc PhD CBiol FRSB
Thomas E S Langton BSc(Hons) CBiol FRSB
Anthony Pilny DVM DABVP
Catrina Steedman BSc(Hons) MRSB
Elaine Toland BSc(Hons) MRSB FRSPH
Clifford Warwick PGDipMedSci CBiol CSci EurProBiol FOCAE FRSB

References

Arena, P. C., Steedman, C., & Warwick, C. (2012). Amphibian and reptile pet markets in the EU: An investigation and assessment. Animal Protection Agency, Animal Public, International Animal Rescue, Eurogroup for Wildlife and Laboratory Animals, Fundación para la Adopción, el Apadrinamiento y la Defensa de los Animales, 52.

Auliya, M. (2003). Hot trade in cool creatures: A review of the live reptile trade in the European Union in the 1990s with a focus on Germany. TRAFFIC Europe, Brussels, Belgium.

Karesh, W. B., Cook, R. A., Gilbert, M., & Newcomb, J. (2007). Implications of wildlife trade on the movement of avian influenza and other infectious diseases. Journal of Wildlife Diseases, 43(3), S55.

Lawrence, K. (1987). The tortoise trade—Mortality in transport: An analysis of 21 years of importations into the United Kingdom. British Veterinary Journal, 143(5), 432-438.

Natusch, D. J., & Lyons, J. A. (2012). Exploited for pets: the harvest and trade of amphibians and reptiles from Indonesian New Guinea. Biodiversity and Conservation, 21(11), 2899-2911.

Rosen, G. E., & Smith, K. F. (2010). Summarizing the evidence on the international trade in illegal wildlife. EcoHealth, 7(1), 24-32.

Toland, E., Warwick, C., & Arena, P. C. (2012). The exotic pet trade: pet hate. Biologist, 59(3), 14-18.

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No competing interests declared.

A comment from the PLOS ONE editorial team

PLOS_ONE_Group replied to ecoarena on 29 Feb 2016 at 18:56 GMT

Phillip Arena and colleagues, who posted the above comments dated 6 December, 2015 and 19 February, 2016 wish to declare the following competing interests:
Elaine Toland serves as the Director of the Animal Protection Agency (APA), an organization that aims to "oppose the activities of individuals or companies involved in the trade in wild animals as pets," as noted on the APA's website (http://www.apa.org.uk/ind...).
Three of the commenters - Elaine Toland, Clifford Warwick and Phillip Arena - are also the authors of the following article: Toland, E., Warwick, C., & Arena, P.C. (2012) The exotic pet trade: pet hate. The Biologist 59(3);14-18.

Additionally, we note the following organizational and institutional affiliations of each of the commenters:

Phillip C Arena BSc(Hons) PhD
Murdoch University (until December 2015, currently, Independent Consultant Herpetologist), Australia

Robert Laidlaw CBiol MRSB
Zoocheck, Canada

Angelo J L Lambiris NHED MSc PhD CBiol FRSB
Honorary Curator of Herpetology, Durban Natural Science Museum, Durban

Thomas E S Langton BSc(Hons) CBiol FRSB
Independent Wildlife Conservation Consultant, United Kingdom

Anthony Pilny DVM DABVP
Center for Avian and Exotic Medicine, United States

Catrina Steedman BSc(Hons) MRSB
Independent Consultant Biologist, United Kingdom

Elaine Toland BSc(Hons) MRSB FRSPH
Director, Animal Protection Agency, United Kingdom

Clifford Warwick PGDipMedSci CBiol CSci EurProBiol FOCAE FRSB
Independent Consultant Biologist & Medical Scientist, United Kingdom

No competing interests declared.

RE: A comment from the PLOS ONE editorial team

David_Roberts replied to PLOS_ONE_Group on 09 Mar 2016 at 10:28 GMT

(1) Once again Arena et al. have used selective and out-of-context quotes to attempt to question the integrity of our original study. Once again we believe that astute readers of the whole article, and literature cited within it, will clearly appreciate how we have dealt with the issues raised.

(2) We note that Arena et al. have declared competing interests, and have an association with an organization that has an agenda to oppose the trade in reptiles. We therefore leave readers to make up their own minds concerning the motivations underlying the responses.

(3) As we previously highlighted, Arena et al.'s critique centres on the argument that Toland et al.'s (2012) estimate of 75% is a more reliable estimate of mortality in the home. Arena et al. state that the data used for the calculation will be published at some uncertain time in the next year or so: until such time the full methodology describing the analysis and assumptions made will presumably remain unavailable. It was therefore unwise to publish the 75% mortality figure as established fact in a magazine article before the full methodology underlying how this was derived was available. The methodology should have been published beforehand and referenced in the article. Indeed, we note that the advertising standards agency has already ruled that the Animal Protection Agency must withdraw information leaflets propagating the 75% mortality figure as fact (https://www.asa.org.uk/Ru...). Once again, we leave the scientific and stakeholder community to decide which they currently consider more reliable: an independent analysis with a full and transparent data set placed in the public domain, or a figure based on an incompletely documented methodology produced by authors with a declared competing interest.

Janine E. Robinson
Freya A. V. St. John
Richard A. Griffiths
David L. Roberts

No competing interests declared.

RE: RE: A comment from the PLOS ONE editorial team

Arena-et-al replied to David_Roberts on 28 Mar 2016 at 20:19 GMT

Response to Robinson et al

Robinson et al continue to refer readers to their original article for support, although in our view the important concerns we have raised regarding their methodology and conclusions remain unanswered.

Robinson et al state that: “Arena et al. have declared competing interests, and have an association with an organization that has an agenda to oppose the trade in reptiles.”

First, by stating that: “Arena et al have competing interests” Robinson et al imply that all our authors have ‘competing interests’, which is incorrect. The facts of the matter are that, in the spirit of openness, E. Toland accepted that as a director of a science-based animal welfare charity it would be fair that she declare an interest, howsoever tacit. However, this cannot reasonably be said constitute a vested interest in a broad sense, given that the more proficient Toland is at ‘her job’ the sooner that job expires!

Second, the competing interest declaration relating to P. Arena and C. Warwick derives only from the fact that Arena and Warwick were co-authors of a cited article (Toland et al 2012), and a finding of that study is juxtaposed against that of Robinson et al.

Third, our transparency appears to us to be in contrast with that of Robinson’s team in which co-author, Richard Griffiths, is the president of a UK-based herpetological organisation that ‘recommends’ the trading and keeping of reptiles, including the capture of wild animals for the pet business, and his organization significantly comprises paying reptile traders and keepers. Colleagues within Arena et al were pre-aware of these arguable competing interests within Robinson et al, although we preferred to address the content of their article.

Accordingly, in our view, if it can be said that Arena, Toland and Warwick (not ‘Arena et al’) can be considered to hold any competing interests at all, then on the same or stronger basis so too can Griffiths.

Robinson et al questions our ‘motivation’, which is not only discourteous, and in our view an improper comment to post on PLOS One, but again diverges from addressing the plain factualness of the extensive criticisms directed at their work.

Robinson et al state that: “Arena et al.'s critique centres on the argument that Toland et al.'s (2012) estimate of 75% is a more reliable estimate of mortality in the home.” This is untrue. In fact, our criticisms centre on the methodology of Robinson et al’s work.

Robinson et al appear not to have properly read our previous comments regarding the strength of the Toland et al (2012) article, in which we made clear that: “Toland et al’s methodology was reduced and summarised by the publisher, not the authors, for spatial reasons after extensive peer-review for data and analytical robustness. For the avoidance of doubt, Toland et al’s (2012) article appeared in a peer-reviewed publication after a long and robust peer-review process.”

Robinson et al state that: “we note that the advertising standards agency has already ruled that the Animal Protection Agency must withdraw information leaflets propagating the 75% mortality figure as fact”.

Robinson et al’s statement is completely false.

The facts of the matter are as follows: The Advertising Standards Authority (not ‘agency’) provided a determination regarding an advertisement that appeared in 2010 (which it is entitled to do), against which a summary challenge can be found here http://www.apa.org.uk/asa... and which exposes the major defects in the ASA process. The Toland et al article, however, was not published or even conceived until approximately two years after the ASA-relevant advertisement and is entirely separate and distinct.


Phillip C Arena BSc(Hons) PhD
Murdoch University (until December 2015, currently, Independent Consultant Herpetologist), Australia

Robert Laidlaw CBiol MRSB
Zoocheck, Canada

Angelo J L Lambiris NHED MSc PhD CBiol FRSB
Honorary Curator of Herpetology, Durban Natural Science Museum, Durban

Thomas E S Langton BSc(Hons) CBiol FRSB
Independent Wildlife Conservation Consultant, United Kingdom

Anthony Pilny DVM DABVP
Center for Avian and Exotic Medicine, United States

Catrina Steedman BSc(Hons) MRSB
Independent Consultant Biologist, United Kingdom

Elaine Toland BSc(Hons) MRSB FRSPH
Director, Animal Protection Agency, United Kingdom

Clifford Warwick PGDipMedSci CBiol CSci EurProBiol FOCAE FRSB
Independent Consultant Biologist & Medical Scientist, United Kingdom


Declarations. Elaine Toland serves as the Director of the Animal Protection Agency (APA), an organization that aims to "oppose the activities of individuals or companies involved in the trade in wild animals as pets," as noted on the APA's website (http://www.apa.org.uk/ind...).
Three of the commenters - Elaine Toland, Clifford Warwick and Phillip Arena - are also the authors of the following article: Toland, E., Warwick, C., & Arena, P.C. (2012) The exotic pet trade: pet hate. The Biologist 59(3);14-18.

Competing interests declared: As stated

RE: RE: RE: A comment from the PLOS ONE editorial team

David_Roberts replied to Arena-et-al on 02 Jun 2016 at 08:20 GMT

We note that Arena et al. raise various issues concerning the accuracy of the information we have previously posted. We refer readers to the website links listed in the postings so that they can make up their own minds on the accuracy of the information.

Arena et al. also allege that one of us (RG) has an undeclared competing interest through his Presidency of the British Herpetological Society. However, information posted by Arena et al. concerning the British Herpetological Society is incorrect and misleading. For the record, the BHS is one of the oldest and most respected scientific societies in the field, and does not recommend ‘the trading and keeping of reptiles, including the capture of wild animals for the pet business’. Indeed, the BHS has a robust and transparent policy on trade that actually discourages the keeping of certain species. In addition, the society supports a wide range of conservation projects, and through its publications and meetings provides an open forum for all sides of debates on topical herpetological issues. We do not believe this constitutes a competing interest, and to ensure that readers are accurately informed about the activities of the society, we have agreed to an addition to the original article which provides a link to the society’s website.

Janine E. Robinson
Freya A. V. St. John
Richard A. Griffiths
David L. Roberts

No competing interests declared.

RE: RE: RE: RE: A comment from the PLOS ONE editorial team

Arena-et-al replied to David_Roberts on 28 Jun 2016 at 09:06 GMT

Robinson et al yet again wrongly mislead and misdirect readers to reach false conclusions with regard to the Advertising Standards Authority (ASA) adjudication in 2010 (addressed previously and restated here http://www.apa.org.uk/asa...). Toland et al’s 2012 article reinforces the irrelevance of the ASA adjudication and shows the ASA’s assessment to be flawed.

Robinson et al also seek to persuade readers that the British Herpetological Society (BHS): “does not recommend the trading and keeping of reptiles, including the capture of wild animals for the pet business”, and therefore, imply that its President (Richard Griffiths) holds no competing interest. However, BHS policy documentation states, among other things, the following: "The BHS therefore recommends that trade should focus on captive-bred stock and/or specimens obtained from the wild as part of such a sustainable yield." (BHS, 2010)

Robinson et al also claim: “…the BHS has a robust and transparent policy on trade that actually discourages the keeping of certain species.” Robinson et al’s statement of ‘discouraging certain species’ omits the fact that the Society goes on to state: “Some selected captive-bred species most suitable as pets: The following list of species is not intended to be comprehensive; experienced and knowledgeable members successfully keep and breed many more. However these species are all commercially captive bred in large numbers, make suitable pets for the average competent person or beginner herpetologist, and are generally available in the UK pet trade. They are listed in the order in which they are most easy to keep, the easiest being at the top of the list. Corn Snakes, King Snakes, Milk Snakes, Leopard Geckos Stinkpot and Mud Turtles Royal Pythons, White’s Tree Frogs Horned Frogs, Fire Salamanders, African Fat-Tailed Geckos, Crested Geckos, Bearded Dragons, Mediterranean Tortoise species, Veiled or Yemeni Chameleons.” (BHS, 2010) Ergo the BHS ‘discourages’ ‘certain’ species whilst proposing others. In addition, as previously stated, Griffiths’ organisation significantly comprises paying reptile traders and keepers.

Regardless, on the issue of a competing interest existing within Robinson et al.’s team, the PLOS One editorial team has followed up on this matter and established that Richard Griffiths’ affiliation with the British Herpetological Society required a clarification on the article to make this information available to readers of the article. Accordingly, readers will note that the editorial team have published a correction. We trust that Robinson et al will make future declarations in PLOS One and other journals to reflect the competing interest within their team.


Phillip C Arena BSc(Hons) PhD
Murdoch University (until December 2015, currently, Independent Consultant Herpetologist), Australia

Robert Laidlaw CBiol MRSB
Zoocheck, Canada

Angelo J L Lambiris NHED MSc PhD CBiol FRSB
Honorary Curator of Herpetology, Durban Natural Science Museum, Durban

Thomas E S Langton BSc(Hons) CBiol FRSB
Independent Wildlife Conservation Consultant, United Kingdom

Anthony Pilny DVM DABVP
Center for Avian and Exotic Medicine, United States

Catrina Steedman BSc(Hons) MRSB
Independent Consultant Biologist, United Kingdom

Elaine Toland BSc(Hons) MRSB FRSPH
Director, Animal Protection Agency, United Kingdom

Clifford Warwick PGDipMedSci CBiol CSci EurProBiol FOCAE FRSB
Independent Consultant Biologist & Medical Scientist, United Kingdom

References

BHS policy on reptiles and amphibians in captivity, pet trade and legislation (2010), 2pp

Toland, E., Warwick, C., & Arena, P.C. (2012) The exotic pet trade: pet hate. The Biologist 59(3);14-18.

Declarations. Elaine Toland serves as the Director of the Animal Protection Agency (APA), an organization that aims to "oppose the activities of individuals or companies involved in the trade in wild animals as pets," as noted on the APA's website (http://www.apa.org.uk/ind...).
Three of the commenters - Elaine Toland, Clifford Warwick and Phillip Arena - are also the authors of the following article: Toland, E., Warwick, C., & Arena, P.C. (2012) The exotic pet trade: pet hate. The Biologist 59(3);14-18.

Competing interests declared: As stated

Competing interests declared: As stated