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"Comment on computer simulations" subsection

Posted by jfaraudo on 24 Nov 2014 at 17:57 GMT

I read the PLoS One article by curiosity arising from the Chemistry World note. I am not an expert on this particular problem and not an expert on STM and I have no idea about the possible existence (or not) of these stripes. But I am an expert on computer simulations and in particular in simulation of self-assembly, and I can say that I disagree with the comments the authors made in the subsection "Comment on computer simulations" . There are clear conceptual mistakes (in their description of the different techniques the authors seem to ignore that since Carr & Parrinello it is possible to make MD simulations based on DFT). I fully disagree with their conclusion that mesoscopic simulations cannot be employed in problems in which there is no clear experimental data to be modelled (I have lots of experience on that), and that it is "tautological" .I am not saying that the problem can be fully solved by simulations, but surely important information (such whether these structures are allowed or not by thermodynamics under specified conditions) can be obtained.

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RE: "Comment on computer simulations" subsection

JulianStirling replied to jfaraudo on 25 Nov 2014 at 17:03 GMT

Hi Jodi.
You are correct that it is possible to do MD simulations based on DFT. We do not mean to imply that no mesoscopic simulations can answer questions where experimental data is unclear. Our point is that the simulations which have been employed did not link to DFT. They used constrained dynamics is used to simply constrain each thiol to the face of a sphere, whereas DFT and experimental data suggested the thiols form ditholate structures with gold adatoms. The simulations employed simply treat intermolecular reactions simply as harmonic springs with a larger (but arbitrary) repulsion between atoms on unlike molecules. These simulations were never designed to clear up unclear experimental data, they were done to try to tease out the physics of clear experimental data. The parameters were chosen to match the experiments and then the physics driving the phase separation was extracted. Now the experiment is called into question these results cannot be used to as evidence for the structure they were designed to show. This is our point.

I do not disagree that it may be possible to use different mesoscopic simulations to probe these structures, but this is not what was done.

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RE: RE: "Comment on computer simulations" subsection

jfaraudo replied to JulianStirling on 26 Nov 2014 at 10:56 GMT

Hi Julian,
Your response here is more clear and a bit more balanced than your statements in the paper. In any case, I read one of the mesoscopic simulation paper in PRL some time ago and I still think that the simulation was nicely designed and the simulation results seem rather convincing to me. Of course, the conclusions of the simulations remain within the limits of applicability of the simulated model. But again, every model has limitations, even those based on DFT have limitations and performance of different models is not so easy as you suggest. As an example think about MD water simulations: "classical" models such as TIP4P/2005 perform better than DFT in predicting (bulk liquid) water properties. The kind of bond or interaction between thiol and gold is of course an important ingredient of the model but it is not so obvious to me that the way this interaction is modelled in these simulations is wrong as you suggest. For me, simulation results can be summarized saying that **if** the molecule-substrate interaction can be modelled as done in the simulations, then thermodynamics allows the formation of structures. But, I agree that it could be essential to investigate the effect of the basic hypothesis of the model on the results, comparing results obtained with different hypothesis or approximations for the bonds. I think that your subsection on simulations could me more stimulating for us (the simulators community) by pointing towards suggestions of possible further, improved simulations to be done rather than making such strong points against simulations themselves (which I see unjustified).

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RE: RE: RE: "Comment on computer simulations" subsection

raphavisses replied to jfaraudo on 26 Nov 2014 at 14:35 GMT

Hi Jordi

Thank you for your comments on our paper. The question of the status of simulations versus experiments, in general, and in this controversy in particular, is very interesting. The message from our paper is certainly not that simulations do not contribute to scientific understanding! I have collaborated fruitfully with theorists in the past using simulations to facilitate the interpretation of experiments (see http://dx.doi.org/doi:10....) and we have ongoing projects on simulations of peptide-capped gold nanoparticles with another group.

I have also blogged about the role of simulations regarding the understanding of the interactions of stripy nanoparticles with cell membranes (http://raphazlab.wordpres...).

I agree with your summary: "For me, simulation results can be summarized saying that **if** the molecule-substrate interaction can be modelled as done in the simulations, then thermodynamics allows the formation of structures."

Note that: 1) We do question the fact that molecule-substrate are modelled adequately; in particular the role of ligand exchange and ligand diffusion; 2) We do not question the fact that thermodynamics allows the formation of structures and we do not rule out the fact that such structures might exist. We only show that the published evidence (in 30+ papers) for the formation of stripes is not conclusive.

Raphael

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RE: "Comment on computer simulations" subsection

toQDuj replied to jfaraudo on 28 Nov 2014 at 05:41 GMT

Dear Jodi,

First of all, thank you very much for your interest in the paper, and thank you very much for your insight. There are still large barriers to commenting on papers, and it is in our best interest that these are overcome to get a discussion.

Worried by your comment that we had overreached or overreacted, I read both the "comment on computer simulations" and the relevant paper again. My apologies in advance: I will probably reiterate some of the points already made by my colleagues in this thread. I just wanted to add my opinion on this:

I suspect that the section header may unfortunately have been a bit misleading. The subsequent section does not purport to criticise computer simulations as such, but largely restricts itself to stating that the DPD simulations (reported by Singh et al.) cannot be considered as proof of the existence of stripy nanoparticles. Unfortunately, Stellacci and proponents have indicated that they do consider the simulations to provide proof of their existence.

From my understanding (having had a little bit of experience with DFT simulations in the past), we always need to be extremely careful using simulations to predict structures not known to exist. Even for DFT, it is almost essential that the chosen method, basis sets and optimization parameters have been demonstrated to give comparable results between calculation and experiment for similar systems.

This is underscored by the drastic approximations necessary for the large-scale DPD simulations of striped morphologies. For example, inter-ligand interaction parameters and a ligand density is chosen (18.75, 33.75, and 0.07 chains/Å^2 but it is not immediately clear how these values were chosen). The nanoparticle is assumed to be spherical, not faceted. Ligands are assumed to attach to each nanoparticle in equal amounts. During optimisation, ligands of the same species are briefly moved together. These choices are probably all valid, and as such would indicate that (under the right conditions) such stripe-like domains can form from entropic considerations alone.

Without further evidence that the set of approximations used for this simulation reliably yields experimental results for similar systems, I would be reluctant to assign predictive properties to the simulation. I would furthermore like to highlight that Fig. 1(f) in the PRL paper is a bit misleading as it appears to show very good agreement between simulated stripe width and experimental stripe width, but through the use of two separate axes obfuscates that the one is consistently about 50% larger. Figure 4(f) furthermore ostensibly shows "stripelike morphology" in STM images, but I am hard pressed to see anything more stripy than pure random phase separation.

However, just to bring this to a close, the evidence that entropic considerations alone can drive the formation of stripes (which is very interesting, nonetheless) is not evidence that they have been obtained using the methodology used by Stellacci et al.. What we need is for a separate group to work on ways for making evidence-supported stripy nanoparticles...

Cheers,


Brian.

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RE: RE: "Comment on computer simulations" subsection

jfaraudo replied to toQDuj on 02 Feb 2015 at 09:01 GMT

Yes, Brian I also wanted to bring this to a close, as you said.

I decided to wait for a some time to answer, since I didn't want to overreact. Also, I was curious to see whether anybody else liked to join us in our discussions .

Well, summarizing, I still stand in my personal view. The computer simulations subsection of the paper contains conceptual mistakes in the description of the different simulation techniques... I'll put very low marks to any student making these comments in my course of computer simulations. As an expert in the field, I disagree with the analysis that you do in the paper of what simulations do and mean, as I explained in my posts (by the way your analysis is far better in the posted discussions in reply to my comments).This is relevant given the nature of your paper, which is a critical review of published work looking for extremelly careful and rigorous analysis of all evidences (which of course is a very good thing to do in science!). Of course, this simulation stuff is only a minor subsection playing a minor role -if any- in your work and conclusions. But I think it would better not to include this subsection as it is in the paper. If you are interested in simulations, a good idea is to do a collaboration with someone of the field (as I understand that you are now doing), and publish your simulation evidence supporting your own findings. In fact, I encourage you to do so and this is something that will have a great interest.

In any case, thank you all for taking the time to respond to my comments and thanks to PLOS One for the opportunity to discuss openly about the contents of the papers.

Jordi

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